Today we have been creating a "welcome to Ruma Rima" Slide Introducing ourselfs to the other schools we have Said our name,what school we go to and a few hobbies.We also put a picture of us on it.
Here is mine.Please Give feedback on what you think ;)
It's great that you enjoy the outdoors and play a variety of sports. I was interested to hear that you wanted to be a builder. Have you considered including a picture of something to do with building.
ReplyDeleteI love you "Welcom to Ruma Rima" slide, you done very well. Good Job!
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DeleteHi there, my name is Sifa and I am a student in Room 9 at Waikowhai School. I really like that you said that you play nba 16 that is a really cool game and I like how you said you like rugby. It made me think of that you're good at playing games. Have you thought rugby is a cool sport? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteThanks for feedback :) im not so interested in ruby but rugby league is my main sport ;),I will check out your blog in my spare time .
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